Sunday, December 20, 2009

By the pyre

And I had tears in my eye
not for you - you were gone
and noone knows where you will go to
but I had tears in my eye
for the ones that were alive
for it is they that have lost

And then I thought
but each one here, has lost only one person-you
but you- you had lost everyone here
And then I cried & cried for you

6 comments:

crusading against myself~! said...

this seems vaguely familiar... did v discuss this or something?

Unknown said...

very thoughtfull..

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Kamlesh Acharya said...

Brilliant thought ... :) ..

But I would say, would've had a much more powerful impact if punctuations were handled a little better.

Fighter Jet said...

Provoking....

T said...

really nice. though i believe that in the end, no body loses anyone.